Comments on: The Fall

By: Mia

Mia — Sat, 15 Mar 2014 21:40:29 +0000

The chilling truth. If it’s not right it can hurt – a lot!!!

~Mia~ xx

TheSinDoll — Thu, 13 Mar 2014 13:04:10 +0000

You hit the nail on the head. Thanks so much for reading.

Jade — Thu, 13 Mar 2014 02:28:52 +0000

I actually read this as a metaphor for a failed romance. I like it literally AND metaphorically.

Lord Raven — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 23:11:52 +0000

brilliant and potent. each snag and bounce on the earth can be felt. Well done

John — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 23:08:33 +0000

Sharp, quick, direct, awesome

Molly — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 22:38:45 +0000

Dark and menacing

Mollyxxx

SassyCat — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 15:57:13 +0000

Poor Jill. Jack pushed her, huh?! Trust no one! lol

Well done.

Clive — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 15:55:58 +0000

Hmmm a good rule for a happy life!

SilverDomUK — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 09:52:34 +0000

How dark and unsettling.

Jane — Wed, 12 Mar 2014 01:39:50 +0000

The words and accompanying image are wonderfully sharp. I love the dark undercurrents in this piece. Very accomplished writing. Jane xxx