May 102010
I wish I was in love with nightmares
Because nightmares are in love with me
They bring me my tears
They feed off my fears
Their wicked kisses won’t let me be
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I wish I was in love with nightmares
Because nightmares are in love with me
They slip out of my head
They dance ’round my bed
Forcing me to submit so passionately
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I wish I was in love with nightmares
Because nightmares are in love with me
The lick of the whip
Thickness of the tip
I can run but I can never leave
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I wish I was in love with nightmares
Because nightmares are in love with me
I cry for days
It’s their evil ways
The marks they leave no one can ever see
Deep feelings in a beautiful poem.
Rebel xox
This is a lovely poem.
very deep and powerful. Nightmares are things or torment that can paralyze in fear or send into lands with horrors only know the the victim. Thank you for sharing. I hope you find peace from them
Lovely poem! And it seems those nightmares go hand-in-hand with BDSM
~Kazi xxx
Truly beautiful!
This is lovely, fast paced and gritty… just how I like my poems.
Mollyxxx
I liked the sensual tone with the nightmares. A lovely little ditty, truly catching, and eloquent.
I really like the use of the refrain – quite a hook.
Thank you.
Lovely deep feelings and great pacing throughout
Thank you. I really appreciate it.